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Hannah G. Caffey's avatar

its not particularly dramatic, but dumbledore's appearance in the first harry potter book really strikes me. we take in his strange clothes, the deluminator that he used to click off all the lights, his weird watch, everything suddenly magical and mysterious. it sets the tone not only for dumbledore himself but for the rest of the series.

Eugenia P. Frankenberg 🥀's avatar

this came to me at the right time as i’m writing my manuscript! yes, characters reacting to situations and how they do it is certainly more effective than just “telling” us who they are.

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